Audience Feedback

 

I have heeded the feedback and acted upon it. The storyline has been changed to adapt more to the audience. I have done this by changing the scene order and making ellipsis more clear so the storyline's concept is more easily grasped. The scenes that were considered too dark were re-filmed and adapted to make even better story line wise. I also separated the sound from the visuals and put sound in the background to counteract this.

Overall, mass change has come and some criticisms aided this. Such as the criticisms about the story line not being clear. I also edited tighter in order to cut down time and add more mystery as it gives less information and leaves the audience guessing.